The 7pm Story

Evening air. Dusty sky.
Ma and I stepped out, just for something quick.

We stopped at a roti stall.
₹15 each, Ma said ₹12.
They smiled, but didn’t budge.

While they debated,
a girl near the counter kept glancing at me.
Not staring, just… noticing.

Her laugh, her tone, something about her
felt like a scene I didn’t want to skip.

They said it’d take 10 minutes.
I hoped we’d wait.

A few rotis, a few minutes… maybe something more.

But Ma just said,
“Leave it, we’ll find better ones.”

And just like that,
the girl, the glance, the moment
left behind
for ₹3 that never changed hands.

Written by Arjuna
Published on Jan 29, 2026

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